Storyboard idea, study task 1

I created a storyboard, based on the three moments I want to create, though in the midst of creating it I stopped because I haven't interviewed the people for this project. Heres what I was considering:

I then created this brief script as to what the animation should be about:

though this may be a bit too much to take on as an animation, I will decide after I have recorded the interviews and edited them. For now, I will need to concentrate on gathering some images for mood boards